Park Walk
Today a man went to the park and when he got there it was very cold because it was winter. All the frost on the grass and all the leaves on the ground, that really did show it was winter. The man was in three layers and a coat as well that’s how cold it was. In the park he found a pair of keys on the floor, he also slipped a couple of times. When he found the keys, he found a trail of leaves, he followed it and found a person, not just any person, but the owner of the keys. Then he went home.
Darragh
Darragh,
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Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA