IN THE SOGGY SCHOOL
It was Monday when the caretaker realised there was a hole in the roof, by now it was raining, so we went inside. I was really overwhelmed with the news. I was in the cafeteria and enjoying my lunch when I had an idea. So, there was this piece of plastic that I thought might fit the hole, but it didn’t, so I went to the science room hoping to see Gareth the scientist and tell him all about the news. He was there working on some sort of green species of a plant. I told him, then left. Outside was hot now and when I got to the hole it was fixed.
Darragh
IT was a really funny story and the title is really good
ReplyDeleteHello Darragh!
ReplyDeleteYour story left me wondering how the hole was fixed-did they use the piece of plastic you had thought about or some other material?
A soggy school is definitely not a fun place to learn!
Keep writing!
Francine (Team 100)
Twin Cities, Minnesota USA