KILLER ON THE LOOSE
It's a cold frosty morning and the Killer is on a rampage. He leaves a key in the cold frosty grass to try and lure his victims in. He's already killed three victims . All three of them lying on the cold floor of the killers hut. His hut is in the middle of the Montana Forest and Wildlife Reaserch Centre. He videotapes his victims deaths like an animal.
Nick Rye one of the reaserchers is out for a nice stroll. The killer who is currently hiding behind a Burdock root plant has a bolted pipe in his right hand ready to strike. THUD! Right to the back of Nicks head. The killer drags Nick over to his hut then vigorously pull shim inside. Nick was never seen again he's presumabaly DEAD.
Baileigh
Hello Baileigh,
ReplyDeleteIt's obvious in your 131 word story you enjoy murder mysteries. Your introduction to the killer set him as a dangerous person while Nick Rye is the next victim.
While a little long and in need of a some work, I can see the creative potential in your writing. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia