WRESTLING SHARKS
I went to the zoo for the first time last week. When I entered, there was a monkey that shoved me when I walked by him and ran away. The zoo was in absolute chaos, with empty mustard and jam jars everywhere for some reason. There was a group of crocodiles “playing” guitars and drums. The noise was so horrible I covered my ears. But the most extraordinary thing was the shark wrestling. Crowds had gathered round and were cheering! I sprinted out of the zoo, but that night, I had haunted nightmares of wrestling sharks…
Eoin
I like that you said 'he sprinted out of the zoo' but why does 'playing' have the speech things on it?
ReplyDeleteHi Eoin,
ReplyDeleteWell done on your story this week. You've done a great job fitting all the prompt words into your writing. It sounds like a crazy day at the zoo!
Keep up the great writing.
Ms Brennock
Team 100 w/c
Dublin, Ireland
Cool 😎
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